First feedback on my first book has been received

I received my first feedback on my first book today. Okay, it was my daughter, but still family is often the worst critic. It said:

It’s good, it makes you want to keep reading which is always good - there are a few times where you used “passed” where it should have been “past” though just to keep an eye out for your second one 

Obviously I will go back to the first book and remedy that error. I received my first feedback on my first book today.



😛Vandaag heb ik mijn eerste feedback op mijn eerste boek ontvangen. Oke, het was van mijn dochter, maar ze zeggen immers dat familie het meest kritisch is.
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It’s good, it makes you want to keep reading which is always good - there are a few times where you used “passed” where it should have been “past” though just to keep an eye out for your second one